B. J. Winters

I've decided to incorporate comments from Harper Collins and others into one final version of Ghost Writer.   Between September and December I'll post this a chapter at a time on Fiction Press. 

Key changes 1) Relationship with Nadiya, 2) Venue (Sacramento instead of Los Angeles), 3) More interaction with Bailey and Joel, and some additional information on Tommy Martin.

Eighty percent of the plot will likely remain the same.  Comments incredibly welcome!  I'm in the final stages of a contest at Webooks with the first three chapters due by the end of September.  Any help on Chapters 2 and 3 (which should be posted on FP by September 10) would be most welcome.  It's the first four chapters of this story that have always been a struggle.  Maybe this time I'll get it right.

Wish me luck. 

P.S. I might be changing the title of this story since a movie came out with the same name this year.  If you have a brilliant idea, share it in a comment here or via email.  halemarcum@yahoo.com